Do you like this sonnet I wrote?

I have not used this structure before and it sounds nice. I should be trying this one out soon. “vainly” is suggestive of the Roman view of Ulysses or Odysseus. I don’t know what a Swigger is but the sound likewise gives a negative connotation perhaps describing the winey and flailing sea which the speaker, misunderstood, braves because of her beauty. Yes I like this poem…a lot.